I have my husband and my babe. The little man gnashed his teeth and fled
– I knew his name. Bereft of baubles and ambition, I sit among the
mingled straw and gold and spin.
This post was written in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge weekend prompt: take a famous story, poem, book, or fable, and retell it in exactly 33 words.
Christine Hanolsy 
Thanks for linking up to Trifextra! My kids are currently obsessed with the longer version of this story. I am going to try to sub in your version tonight and see what happens. You’ve hit all the main points. Love it. Hope to see you back soon.
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Love the story of rumplestitzkin. This was a great reselling In only 33 words
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Definitely better than the original.
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You got all the important facts into your 33 words. Nicely done.
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This sounds so much better than the original.
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…and makes for an ideal quickie bedtime story when Mommy’s ready to call it a day. 🙂
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I really like this one.
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hahahaha got him!!!!
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