HookWith a crook of a finger and a crooked smile  you fished my heart out from its tranquil sea. Oh, how easily I was gulled into believing you, into leaving my familiar waters.

This post was written in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge  weekend prompt:

Write a 33-word response using the name of an animal as a verb. 

11 responses to “Caught

  1. This is a delightful 33 words!


  2. I love how you keep us hooked in the waters with this fishtail of a tale.


  3. i absolutely love your poetry masquerading as prose, beautiful writing


  4. Gulled is perfect! And a cool story too!


  5. kudos, gull was a great word choice for this and the tale i think many have found to be true!


  6. This is a lovely piece.


  7. Hooked! Love the “gulled.” Great job!


  8. The crook of a finger (like a hook), fishing for her heart, leaving familiar waters – the fish theme flowed perfectly throughout this piece.


  9. Love your use of the prompt, and the whole lyrical feel of the piece!


  10. I love that you worked in more than one animal while still keeping the theme consistent. Lovely!


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