With a crook of a finger and a crooked smile you fished my heart out from its tranquil sea. Oh, how easily I was gulled into believing you, into leaving my familiar waters.
This post was written in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge weekend prompt:
Write a 33-word response using the name of an animal as a verb.
I love that you worked in more than one animal while still keeping the theme consistent. Lovely!
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Love your use of the prompt, and the whole lyrical feel of the piece!
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The crook of a finger (like a hook), fishing for her heart, leaving familiar waters – the fish theme flowed perfectly throughout this piece.
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Hooked! Love the “gulled.” Great job!
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Love it!
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This is a lovely piece.
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kudos, gull was a great word choice for this and the tale i think many have found to be true!
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Gulled is perfect! And a cool story too!
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i absolutely love your poetry masquerading as prose, beautiful writing
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I love how you keep us hooked in the waters with this fishtail of a tale.
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This is a delightful 33 words!
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