I thought I understood the geology of us. I measured your faults. I studied your sulphur springs. It wasn’t enough.
With each word you drill down deep – crust, mantle, core – and I erupt.
This post was made in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge weekend Trifextra prompt:
On to the weekend challenge. As you’ll recall from your elementary science class days, the structure of the earth can be divided most simply into three sections: core, mantle, crust.
Give us 33 words from it. Interpret the prompt however you wish–literal, metaphorical, or somewhere in between.
This is really good writing. Great job with the prompt.
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Thanks, Deana! I had a bunch of ideas, and this is what floated to the top.
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This is intensely personal and stirring. Nicely done.
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Very good. Great description of a relationship.
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words can hurt so much. this is well done.
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Good one! Visceral and moving. So easily recognizable!
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This is intense for only 33 words! Amazing!
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Powerful images! Well done!
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oh, lovely, powerful, metaphorical volcano 🙂
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I don’t know how you do it each week…another great response! I swear I have felt this – especially the drilling down deep with words. Those darn buttons get pushed and watch out 🙂
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It’s unfortunate that I know EXACTLY what you’re talking about. So accurate–this feeling of angst and eruption! I love your play on words, and the title, too!
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Ah, but it’s not always a bad thing, for someone to drill so deep. I meant it to be taken both ways. The line between passion and fury is so unclear…
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I came back to reread… Interesting–I’m usually a glass half full person, but this must have really struck a nerve with a certain relationship I know of, in a glass-totally-empty way. 🙂 Thanks for the clarification. Now I love your piece even more.
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As always, I am blown away by your writing. I don’t know what it is about your ‘voice’, but there’s something there so smooth and easy that I admit it makes me envious upon occasion…
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Loved the word”geology” as u used it here:-)Fault lines -wow!Yes,drilling for the hidden core through all that is on the surface & then the climax-or is it the anti-climax?;-)Wonderfully inlaid meanings Christine-I can see what you meant ,now:-)
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Wow! This is beautiful Christine – “I measured your faults” and “It wasn’t enough” – awesome imagery! Great take on the prompt.
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Powerful piece. And that last line! Tweet that shit!!
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I love this! Very powerful piece indeed! I felt very moved and felt the pain and anguish associated with a… not so favorable relationship! Good work! Haha I like what KymmInBarcelona said and I have to agree, “TWEET THAT SHIT!” haha
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Great 33 words!
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Hadn’t thought of it that way, but yes. It really is.
Nice take.
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