Heaven on Earth

“It’s not the Rapture.”

“My mother thinks it is. Should we get ready?”

“You know they won’t have us. We’ll have to stick it out here, earthbound and ephemeral.”

“Okay by me, love.”


This post was made in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge weekend Trifextra writing prompt:

For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.

16 responses to “Heaven on Earth

  1. Nice! I always figured I’d be sticking out on earth myself.

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  2. Yup, I’ll be left behind. Loved this!

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  3. Known devil is better,what say?;-)Great job!

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  4. You managed to convery a whole philosophy in 33 words. Well done! And, a cool message too!

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  5. Earthbound and ephemeral, grounded and forever. You are the master of 33 words!

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  6. This is awesome! Great use of dialogue. Well done!

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  7. Awww I love this. Love conquers even rapture (:

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  8. alternate title: “En(d)raptured”

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  9. At least they’ll stick together.

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  10. This is so cute! I love how everything is conveyed through dialogue

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  11. I love this! “You know they won’t have us” — and yet they’ll still be together. Awesome!

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