“It’s not the Rapture.”
“My mother thinks it is. Should we get ready?”
“You know they won’t have us. We’ll have to stick it out here, earthbound and ephemeral.”
“Okay by me, love.”
This post was made in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge weekend Trifextra writing prompt:
For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.
I love this! “You know they won’t have us” — and yet they’ll still be together. Awesome!
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A sweet apocalypse!
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oh, dear
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This is so cute! I love how everything is conveyed through dialogue
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At least they’ll stick together.
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alternate title: “En(d)raptured”
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Oh! That’s awesome. I am terrible with titles – I’m afraid they are usually afterthoughts.
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That’s funny. 😛
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Awww I love this. Love conquers even rapture (:
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This is awesome! Great use of dialogue. Well done!
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Earthbound and ephemeral, grounded and forever. You are the master of 33 words!
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You managed to convery a whole philosophy in 33 words. Well done! And, a cool message too!
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Known devil is better,what say?;-)Great job!
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Yup, I’ll be left behind. Loved this!
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Nice! I always figured I’d be sticking out on earth myself.
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Very nice!
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