You have always been content to let the minnows dazzle you with their bright glinting. How myopic. Where you see fish, I see stars drifting across the deep inverted basin of the sky.
This post was made in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge weekend Trifextra prompt:
This weekend we’re asking you to add thirty of your own words to the following three words for a total of thirty-three: myopic, dazzle, basin.
Christine Hanolsy 
Lovely. A rebuke and a dreaming in one tasty bite.
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Quite beautiful.
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Beautiful imagery. Congrats on the win! 🙂
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Beautiful! I read it over and over, loving the inverted view.
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lovely! i can imagine such a tranquil, starlit scene.
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Just gorgeous, Christine. The way you used the words *swoon*
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Beautiful inversion of perspective!
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Absolutely stunning, Christine. Really amazing write, per usual. I agree with Steph. 🙂
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I want to dive into your scene right now. Great stuff. Thanks for linking up!
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oh so lyrical. You have a way of rounding the words and calming the soul.
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Lovely – looks like we both had stars on our mind!
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I like the image of stars in the basin of the sky. Very lyrical. Perfect.
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I’m with Steph, Christine. It’s what you “see” and then how you express it, that simply amazes me every time you write:)
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You are amazing in getting a lot into those 33 words..
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I love your entry, especially where you flipped the image at the end. Seems like the three words made both of us think about perspective.
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Christine, no one stands a chance when you enter the 33. Breathtaking, as always. Just lovely.
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*blush* Oh, Steph, you totally flatter me! Thank you for your sweet words.
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