Stargazing

It amazes me, how the stars glitter in your eyes. How all the answers seem to hover just behind the curtain of your hair. But still, there is more understanding in the infinite spaces between the spheres than in all your words.


This post was made in response to this week’s gargleblaster question:

What’s so amazing that keeps us stargazing?

Our challenge is to answer the question in exactly 42 words. Come join the fun over at yeah write!

15 responses to “Stargazing

  1. Love it. And love the new challenge! So happy to be in your poetical proximity. 🙂

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  2. understanding silence is way more important. Thumbs up.

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  3. This is just gorgeous! Love, love, love it!

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  4. Hello again Christine! Different writing challenge but same high standard of dreamyness. Good one!

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  5. If I’m reading it right, that’s beautiful!

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  6. Ah, I wish I could come up with such wonderful phrases as you!

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  7. Natalie DeYoung

    “More understanding in the infinite spaces between the spheres” – gah, I love it.

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  8. Loved the imagery I hope to join you all again, time permitting, you’re a great bunch

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  9. Ooh, deliciously suggestive. This one demanded a few reads and a bit of a ponder. Lovely!

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  10. Ooh, this is so lovely, Christine! Gorgeous work. 🙂

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  11. This is great:

    “answers seem to hover just behind the curtain of your hair.”

    Well done!

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  12. As a whole, this was gorgeous… but that last line cinched it for me. Great writing!

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  13. I think this is why you like my writing; we both somehow ended up at the spaces between rather than the stars themselves.

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