Every Tuesday at 7:00, like clockwork, I pass her on the street. Most days she watches me, eyes shaded by a tattered scarf, fingers twitching restlessly. She never smiles. It wouldn’t bother me, if I always took the same route to work.
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Christine Hanolsy 
Oooo. Creepy. 😉
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YIKES! I’d start taking the car to work. lol
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Oh the haunting! Spooky tale and the fog 😀
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Eeks!So delightfully creepy!Loved it Christine 🙂
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OMG. yes, that’s troublesome.
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Oh brilliant, what a twist.
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That was fantastic mate!
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I love this. A really relatable experience suddenly turns into something quite sinister. Beautifully done!
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unsettling and beautiful.
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Cool twist at the end!
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Just the right amount of creepiness. I’m left wondering why she’s following your protagonist. Unsettling!
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Oh, went from nice to niiiiiiice in one twist.
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Awesome last sentence – that brought the creep factor into it for me 🙂
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There is definitely a touch off scary to this, for me! Yes, haunting is the perfect word!
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oooooh.
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Very mysterious! I loved the twist at the end.
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Oh, wow.
the idea of “she’s everywhere”, was never so vivid, haunting.
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