Fixtures October 21, 2014October 21, 2014 They crowd our shared space: your unvoiced concern, my silent struggle. Yesterday you skirted the edges of your unease. My words skittered like mice across the floor and gave us room to breathe. Come morning, the dust will settle back into place. Share this:TweetLike this:Like Loading...
Jen says: October 23, 2014 at 7:02 am Reply I love the descriptives! mice, dust settling. Love your pieces. 🙂 LikeLike
Marcy says: October 22, 2014 at 5:10 pm Reply Great job. I’m so glad I read the comment, because although I was struck by the phrase, I hadn’t thought of the mouse/elephant connection. LikeLike
Stacie says: October 22, 2014 at 2:10 pm Reply The mouse thing is perfect! I wish I could gargle as beautifully as you do! LikeLike
KymmInBarcelona says: October 22, 2014 at 11:37 am Reply skirted and skittered and mice. In awe. LikeLike
Mike says: October 22, 2014 at 5:30 am Reply I also thought this was a lovely piece of writing. Loved the idea of words skittering across the floor like mice. LikeLike
Silverleaf says: October 22, 2014 at 5:22 am Reply You. This. So so good! I look forward every week to the poetry of your words. This is lovely. LikeLike
Kinley Dane says: October 22, 2014 at 4:26 am Reply I had the same theme, but I loved that our takes on it were so different. Really awesome piece, as always. LikeLike
nabanita21 says: October 21, 2014 at 10:19 pm Reply Very interesting… Like Angie says allusion to the mice was a brilliant stroke Random Thoughts Naba – Healing Together LikeLike
angieinspired says: October 21, 2014 at 10:37 am Reply I like the allusion to the mice here, as elephants are afraid of them. Here’s to uncovering the elephants in our rooms:) LikeLike
Thats awesome man!
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I love the descriptives! mice, dust settling. Love your pieces. 🙂
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Great job. I’m so glad I read the comment, because although I was struck by the phrase, I hadn’t thought of the mouse/elephant connection.
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The mouse thing is perfect! I wish I could gargle as beautifully as you do!
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skirted and skittered and mice. In awe.
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I also thought this was a lovely piece of writing.
Loved the idea of words skittering across the floor like mice.
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You. This. So so good! I look forward every week to the poetry of your words. This is lovely.
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I had the same theme, but I loved that our takes on it were so different. Really awesome piece, as always.
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Very interesting… Like Angie says allusion to the mice was a brilliant stroke
Random Thoughts Naba – Healing Together
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I like the allusion to the mice here, as elephants are afraid of them. Here’s to uncovering the elephants in our rooms:)
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