Last night I glimpsed the curve of the Milky Way. It was in the arch of your lip, the arc of your back. For one instant I was weightless. Unmoored, I would have drifted away but for the anchor of your arms.
Christine, you paint these wonderfully exquisite, sensual, romantic pictures with such perfect care. Every word, from the title, to the drawing down from the universe into the personal is just so…perfect. And that idea of zero gravity, but for a lover’s arms! Just wow.
I’m charmed by the way this connects to the prompt. When the earth stops turning, there is no gravity. It’s lovely that there’s something logical behind the nomadic mood.
So sweetly and beautifully written! The details in what the speaker is saying are simply sexy. Well done!
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Thanks, Tony! 🙂 That’s pretty much what I was aiming for – I’m glad it came across!
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You have such a gift, Christine.
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Aww, Stacie. You are too sweet. 🙂
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Christine, you paint these wonderfully exquisite, sensual, romantic pictures with such perfect care. Every word, from the title, to the drawing down from the universe into the personal is just so…perfect. And that idea of zero gravity, but for a lover’s arms! Just wow.
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*blink blink* You just made my day. Thank you so much for this.
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Mwah! xo
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It flowed so beautifully. I love how you brought in the cosmos to the physical realm.
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Thanks so much, Renada! I can’t help it – they’re intertwined in my mind. 🙂
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So romantic…love it! ♥
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Thanks, Kathy – romantic is exactly what I was going for!
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So many layers here- movement, grace, beauty, cosmos, love, lovers. How, how do you do it in 42?
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I’m charmed by the way this connects to the prompt. When the earth stops turning, there is no gravity. It’s lovely that there’s something logical behind the nomadic mood.
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I love that you got *exactly* what I was going for! Thanks so much, Nate!
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Wow
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Thanks, Ruby! 🙂
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So poetic. So lyrical. I adore this!
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Thanks, Tina – you are so kind!
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A sweeping mini-saga.
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Wow! Thanks, Angie!
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Lovely write, and very sexy.
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Thanks, Kymm! The prompt kind of inspired sexy.
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“the curve of the Milky Way” is a breathtaking image.
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🙂 I rather liked it.
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This is lovely. It flows beautifully. Good writing!
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Thank you, Susan! 🙂
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