21 thoughts on “One way out

  1. Silverleaf says:

    I love your ability here to weave beautiful words into a scene that is gritty and raw and full of pain. The pink glow of the sign and the teeth in her skin make it real and immediate.

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  2. innatejames says:

    This brought to mind another song: Strangers/Lovers by Ibenyi. The chorus of which is “These days will be our last.” So I couldn’t help thinking that this was the narrator’s realization and she wouldn’t do it again until it was with the right person. I’m romantical that way.

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