the sky—a held breath
somewhere a robin calls out
heralding the rain

6 responses to “Morning

  1. “a held breath” is the highlight of this haiku!


  2. I like how “heralding” echos “held.”


  3. The clouds do feel like they’re holding their breath sometimes. That’s beautiful.


  4. Jennifer G. Knoblock

    That combination of sky’s held breath and robin’s song, magically lovely.


  5. simply beautiful ❤


  6. They are heralds aren’t they?


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