Morning

the sky—a held breath
somewhere a robin calls out
heralding the rain


6 responses to “Morning

  1. “a held breath” is the highlight of this haiku!

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  2. I like how “heralding” echos “held.”

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  3. The clouds do feel like they’re holding their breath sometimes. That’s beautiful.

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  4. Jennifer G. Knoblock

    That combination of sky’s held breath and robin’s song, magically lovely.

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  5. simply beautiful ❤

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  6. They are heralds aren’t they?

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