Morning March 2, 2016March 2, 2016 the sky—a held breath somewhere a robin calls out heralding the rain Share this:TweetLike this:Like Loading...
Jennifer G. Knoblock says: March 3, 2016 at 8:41 am Reply That combination of sky’s held breath and robin’s song, magically lovely. LikeLike
Liv says: March 3, 2016 at 7:36 am Reply The clouds do feel like they’re holding their breath sometimes. That’s beautiful. LikeLike
theinnerzone says: March 3, 2016 at 6:56 am Reply “a held breath” is the highlight of this haiku! LikeLike
Christine Hanolsy 
They are heralds aren’t they?
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simply beautiful ❤
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That combination of sky’s held breath and robin’s song, magically lovely.
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The clouds do feel like they’re holding their breath sometimes. That’s beautiful.
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I like how “heralding” echos “held.”
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“a held breath” is the highlight of this haiku!
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