Between this stolen ship and home
a promise made (a broken vow)
was written in the rolling foam.
Between this stolen ship and home
a breach too wide to cross has grown.
I toss a ring across the bow
between this stolen ship and home:
a promise, made a broken vow.
Christine Hanolsy 
I love what “stolen” adds to this piece and how the iambic tetrameter feels like rocking waves.
LikeLike
I like what you did there with the second and eighth lines.
LikeLike
Beautiful. Love the last three lines.
LikeLike
This sings. Lovely!
LikeLike