6 thoughts on “Kiss

  1. cobwebsandconfetti says:

    I love this image! The last line particularly was gorgeous and well-phrased (loved your use of “thus). I do think “gloriously” felt a little awkward – maybe because of the grammar? But on the whole I really enjoyed it. The poem is romantic, of course, but also a little unnerving – it reminds me of werewolves and fairy rings and everything uncanny that’s associated with big, intoxicating moons.

    (Related – if you’ve never heard Schoenberg’s “Moondrunk,” you should definitely give it a listen! It’s a creepy, strange piece of music that this poem reminded me of, and I think it fits super well with your aesthetic here.)

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