Incorporeal November 1, 2017 I want to wake up with your handprint on my hip and your perfume in my hair. I want to be haunted by your touch. Every breath of wind could be an unexpected caress: phantom kisses against my skin. Share this:TweetLike this:Like Loading...
Abby Williams says: November 2, 2017 at 6:37 pm Reply I love the phrase “handprint on my hip.” It’s visceral – we know that feeling, as well as its absence. LikeLike
Christine Hanolsy says: November 2, 2017 at 6:38 pm Reply Exactly. We’ve all either woken up that way, or wanted to. ๐ LikeLike
theinnerzone says: November 2, 2017 at 3:38 pm Reply Beautiful work, Christine! I am officially stealing “haunted by your touch”. Can’t believe I missed microprose challenge again. :[ LikeLike
Christine Hanolsy says: November 2, 2017 at 4:01 pm Reply We miss you! Please come back and see us. ๐ You know you can submit micro on the regular fiction|poetry grid, too……. LikeLiked by 1 person
theinnerzone says: November 2, 2017 at 6:02 pm Reply Aww thank you so much, will definitely post something next week. Much love. LikeLike
innatejames says: November 2, 2017 at 11:24 am Reply This has the creepy sensual going for it. Like that weird scene in Amelie in the fun house? LikeLiked by 1 person
Lisa @ The Meaning of Me says: November 1, 2017 at 8:57 pm Reply I love the clear feeling of desire here, and hope for something unattainable. LikeLiked by 1 person
Christine Hanolsy says: November 1, 2017 at 8:58 pm Reply Ooo thank you – thatโs what I was going for. LikeLiked by 1 person
Lisa @ The Meaning of Me says: November 2, 2017 at 6:03 am Reply Don’t you love when that happens?!? LikeLiked by 1 person
unfoldingfromthefog says: November 1, 2017 at 6:42 pm Reply Surreal and expressive. Love it! LikeLiked by 1 person
Love it!
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I love the phrase “handprint on my hip.” It’s visceral – we know that feeling, as well as its absence.
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Exactly. We’ve all either woken up that way, or wanted to. ๐
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Beautiful work, Christine! I am officially stealing “haunted by your touch”. Can’t believe I missed microprose challenge again. :[
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We miss you! Please come back and see us. ๐ You know you can submit micro on the regular fiction|poetry grid, too…….
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Aww thank you so much, will definitely post something next week. Much love.
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You are so good at this!
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This has the creepy sensual going for it. Like that weird scene in Amelie in the fun house?
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I love the clear feeling of desire here, and hope for something unattainable.
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Ooo thank you – thatโs what I was going for.
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Don’t you love when that happens?!?
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Surreal and expressive. Love it!
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