Launch

“On my word.” The Admiral spoke without rancor.

“Yes, ma’am.” My hand hovered above the console. The bridge was silent; everyone was waiting for me. This could start the end of everything.

“Go,” she said. I pushed the button.


3 responses to “Launch

  1. I really liked that it wasn’t revealed straight away that the Admiral is female. There is an absence of a stereotype based on gender. Well done.

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  2. I loved the way you used rancor here, it said so much in one line. I also loved that this was layered with anticipation in the way you kept the lines short and succinct.

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  3. It’s often considered that females are against the “end of everything”. Still, you have painted the opposite using a female admiral. Sometimes it’s imperative to get the job done. Good.

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