Accord

“I will go, if you ask it.”

The lantern is turned down low. Its dim light pools on the table, glints off the brandy glass dangling from your fingers. I wish I could see your face.

“No.” Your voice drifts out of the shadows, gentle as rain. “Stay.”


5 responses to “Accord

  1. Your micros are always so poetic and this is no exception!

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  2. I agree with Stacie! This is so poetic and beautiful!

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  3. Love how all of the weight in this scene rests on “I wish I could see your face.”

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  4. haunting and beautiful. you placed me in the moment.

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  5. The low light really enhances the anxiety the speaker is feeling in waiting for an answer.

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