13 thoughts on “Truths

  1. Imaginings says:

    There’s so much emotional tension with just the way the narrator describes the scene and without any dialogue between the characters. Very well done! The only thing that might need tweaking is “an unsigned contract.” I wasn’t sure if that analogy was the perfect fit for the tone of the piece; it sounds business-like where the narrator sounds like he/she desires more of an emotional connection. It stands out against the wound spring analogy.

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