This is just to say January 27, 2020January 27, 2020 My belly is an island My breasts a pair of dunes Rising above a sea of Blankets The landscape of my body Has been changed Not by your hands But because of them Forgive me I used to find beauty Only In an unbroken horizon Share this:TweetLike this:Like Loading...
northie says: January 30, 2020 at 11:35 am Reply So vivid. The second stanza for me was the best. The wry humour, and love, really made me smile. LikeLiked by 1 person
Laissez Faire says: January 30, 2020 at 7:22 am Reply Abstract type poetry tends to go over my head, but I really liked the sound and flow of this line: I used to find beauty … In an unbroken horizon LikeLiked by 1 person
Sanch @ Sanch Writes says: January 29, 2020 at 2:33 am Reply Oh I love this piece. Such vivid descriptions but I especially loved the final stanza. LikeLiked by 1 person
Mae Goes West says: January 27, 2020 at 12:14 pm Reply Well, I’m ready to read more when you’re ready to post 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person
Mae Goes West says: January 27, 2020 at 10:28 am Reply This is such a beautiful poem, especially about the unbroken horizons. Thanks for sharing! I’m eager to read your next post. LikeLike
Christine Hanolsy says: January 27, 2020 at 12:03 pm Reply Thank you so much, Mae – it’s been a while since I posted a poem. I’m glad you like it! LikeLiked by 1 person
So vivid. The second stanza for me was the best. The wry humour, and love, really made me smile.
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Abstract type poetry tends to go over my head, but I really liked the sound and flow of this line: I used to find beauty … In an unbroken horizon
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Oh I love this piece. Such vivid descriptions but I especially loved the final stanza.
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Well, I’m ready to read more when you’re ready to post 🙂
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This is such a beautiful poem, especially about the unbroken horizons. Thanks for sharing! I’m eager to read your next post.
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Thank you so much, Mae – it’s been a while since I posted a poem. I’m glad you like it!
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